"Let us fly," said the flea,
"Let us flee," said the fly,
"Right," said Fred,
"Wrong," said Flo, "let us flay the flaw from the flue."
THE SYNOPSIS IS COMPLETE (ish, lol)
I have transferred it into chapter headings
now I only need to write the bugger
it's particularly complicated because I have 3 viewpoint characters, who are *far less powerful* than at least 4 significant background characters who are closely involved in the plot (not handsoff questgiver types)
keeping coherency, and character agency, is a fine line
it's Sunday, so I'm writing! More accurately: I'm plotting. Updating the synopsis so things all fall into place... it's working so far...
I know what's happening at the beginning.
I know how it ends.
What I do NOT know is the middle... AS ALWAYS...
send help, my brain is melting trying to get the synopsis straight so I know what is happening in the rest of the plot
having an 'ok this book starts so well but ALL I NEED TO DO IS WORK OUT THE REST OF THE PLOT oh whoops' moment
again!
last night I played my first jubensha (think murder mystery roleplaying game for a small group)
today, I am writing my first jubensha
started drafting my query letter before work this morning - the book is nowhere near drafted but the 2-para characters and stakes summary for the query was actually really fun and motivational
this book has a LOT going on
it's traditional for a character whose title is Mistress of Novices to be a nasty piece of work, right?
hmm. What might an underwater humanoid civilization want to trade with people on the shore? What do shore-dwellers have they might need?
A thing fantasy often gets wrong:
Before the Industrial Revolution. Clothes were EXPENSIVE. Very, very expensive. Most people had more or less only one set of outer clothes and a few of underwear. If you were prosperous you might have a 'best' set....
how much do you like these tropes?
enemies to lovers - 4/10
second chance - 0/10
fake dating - 0/10
friends to lovers - 3/10
age gap - 3/10
found family - minus one million/10
grumpy x sunshine - 1/10
pregnancy - 0/10
slowburn - 3/10
love triangle - 5/10




