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Donor trust isnât built on strategy alone.
Itâs built on đ€đ¶đđ”đ¶đłđŠ.
Because what happens inside your organization
eventually shows up outside.
Hereâs what healthy nonprofit teams prioritize:
đ§đ”đČđ đ”đŒđ»đŒđż đđ”đČ đșđ¶đđđ¶đŒđ»âđŻđđ đźđčđđŒ đđ”đČ đœđČđŒđœđčđČ đ±đŒđ¶đ»đŽ đđ”đČ đđŒđżđž
Burnout doesnât advance the cause.
It breaks the team carrying it.
đ§đ”đČđ đđŒđčđđČ đœđżđŒđŻđčđČđșđ đđ¶đđ”đŒđđ đŻđčđźđșđČ
The goal isnât to point fingers.
Itâs to move forwardâtogether.
đ§đ”đČđ đ°đŒđșđșđđ»đ¶đ°đźđđČ đčđ¶đžđČ đźđ±đđčđđ
Direct. Respectful. Clear.
No gossip. No games.
đ§đ”đČđ đ°đČđčđČđŻđżđźđđČ đđșđźđčđč đđ¶đ»đ
Because waiting for the annual report
is too long to say, âWell done.â
đ§đ”đČđ đœđżđŒđđČđ°đ đșđźđżđŽđ¶đ»
Rested teams are creative teams.
And creative teams raise more money.
You canât build a movement
on the back of a tired, discouraged staff.
The most sustainable organizations?
They invest in mission đąđŻđ„ morale.
Whatâs one small way youâre building a healthy team culture this week?
Most fundraising problems arenât about money.
Theyâre about đźđ°đźđŠđŻđ”đ¶đź.
Because when momentum is on your side,
donors give faster.
Teams move quicker.
Vision feels possible.
Hereâs how smart leaders build it:
đ§đ”đČđ đđđźđżđ đŻđČđłđŒđżđČ đđ”đČđ đłđČđČđč đżđČđźđ±đ
Perfection kills movement.
Launch, then learn.
đ§đ”đČđ đđ”đźđżđČ đČđźđżđčđ đđ¶đ»đ
Nothing attracts support like progress.
Even small steps deserve to be seen.
đ§đ”đČđ đ¶đ»đđ¶đđČ đŒđđ”đČđżđ đ¶đ»đđŒ đđ”đČ đđđŒđżđ
Donât wait for the final chapter.
Let donors help write it.
đ§đ”đČđ đżđČđșđŒđđČ đłđżđ¶đ°đđ¶đŒđ»
Make it easy to give.
Easy to say yes.
Easy to take the next step.
đ§đ”đČđ đđ”đŒđ đđœ đ°đŒđ»đđ¶đđđČđ»đđčđ
Momentum doesnât come from a one-time push.
It comes from showing up, again and again.
The difference between a stalled campaign and a thriving one
often isnât budget or bandwidth.
Itâs belief.
And the courage to move.
Whereâs your next stepâwaiting for permission?
My smartest early move cost postage.
When I became president of a nonprofit, I wrote to donors who had stopped giving.
I pulled a list of significant donors who had lapsed and sent each one a personal card.
The card did two things. It thanked them for what they had already given and invested. And it introduced me as the new president.
Six figures in giving came back from that list. It worked better than I expected.
Most lapsed donors never decided to leave. Somewhere along the way, someone stopped talking to them like people.
If you want to try it:
1. Pull donors who gave meaningfully and haven't given in 13 months or more.
2. Write by hand, or at least sign by hand. A printed letter with a scanned signature is a different thing.
3. Thank them for something specific their past giving did.
4. Give them a reason you're writing now. A new leader, a milestone, the anniversary of their first gift.
5. Follow up with a story about what their giving made possible.
The cards cost almost nothing next to what came back.
How long does a donor go silent before your team calls her lapsed?
Stop asking your staff for stories.
Ask that way and you'll get the answer we got recently: "I don't have any."
We needed several stories for an impact report. One donor supports multiple children's homes we serve, and he wanted to see what his giving was doing. Our coordinator asked a home director for stories.
"I don't have any stories."
When you do the work every day, none of it feels like a story. It feels like Tuesday.
So she stopped asking for stories and asked about specific things instead. The same director came back with several.
Questions that get stories:
1. "What's new with the student whose scholarship we funded?"
2. "Did anything arrive this month? A washer and dryer, a water pump?"
3. "Have any children come to the home recently?"
4. "What's one praise from this month's report?"
5. "What problem did you solve this week that you couldn't solve a year ago?"
One more thing that helps: build the question into reporting you already collect. Every home we support sends a monthly report, and we ask for prayer requests and praise reports in it. Those become our story leads.
The director had stories the whole time. Our first question just couldn't find them.
What question gets your field staff talking?
You donât earn donor trust with one great campaign.
You earn it with đ€đ°đŻđŽđȘđŽđ”đŠđŻđ€đș.
Because trust isnât built in the big moments.
Itâs built in the small ones, repeated over time.
Hereâs what that looks like:
đŹđŒđ đđ”đźđ»đž đđ”đČđ» đđŒđ đ±đŒđ»âđ đ”đźđđČ đđŒ
Not just after the first giftâafter the third. After the year-end bump. After the quiet support. I have found great success thanking pre-lapsed donors.
đŹđŒđ đżđČđœđŒđżđ đŻđźđ°đž đČđđČđ» đđ”đČđ» đżđČđđđčđđ đźđżđČ đșđČđđđ
Transparency beats spin. Every time.
đŹđŒđ đ°đŒđșđșđđ»đ¶đ°đźđđČ đđ”đČđ» đđŒđâđżđČ đ»đŒđ đźđđžđ¶đ»đŽ
If the only time they hear from you is when you need something,
youâve trained them to tune out.
đŹđŒđ đłđŒđčđčđŒđ đđ”đżđŒđđŽđ” đŒđ» đœđżđŒđșđ¶đđČđ
If you say youâll update, update.
If you say their gift makes an impact, show them.
đŹđŒđ đđżđČđźđ đČđđČđżđ đ±đŒđ»đŒđż đčđ¶đžđČ đź đœđźđżđđ»đČđż
Not a transaction. Not a line on a spreadsheet.
Someone whose story is now tied to yours.
Trust doesnât grow in urgency.
It grows in đ©đ°đŻđ°đł.
Whatâs one way youâve shown up for donors this monthâwithout asking for anything in return?
Most nonprofit leaders arenât stuck because they lack ideas.
Theyâre stuck because theyâre avoiding a đ©đąđłđ„ decision.
The program that isnât working.
The staff member who isnât aligned.
The strategy that feels safeâbut isnât effective.
Hereâs what courageous leaders do:
đ§đ”đČđ đ»đźđșđČ đđ”đźđ đŒđđ”đČđżđ đźđżđČ đźđłđżđźđ¶đ± đđŒ đđźđ
Not to stir conflictâ
but to make progress.
đ§đ”đČđ đźđ°đ đŻđČđłđŒđżđČ đđ”đČ đŻđŒđźđżđ± đŽđ¶đđČđ đœđČđżđșđ¶đđđ¶đŒđ»
Leadership isnât about waiting.
Itâs about owning the future.
đ§đ”đČđ đœđżđđ»đČ đŻđČđłđŒđżđČ đđ”đČđ đœđčđźđ»đ
Growth doesnât start with more.
It starts with letting go.
đ§đ”đČđ đ°đ”đŒđŒđđČ đșđ¶đđđ¶đŒđ» đŒđđČđż đ°đŒđșđłđŒđżđ
Even when it costs popularity.
Even when it feels lonely.
đ§đ”đČđ đđżđźđ±đČ đ°đŒđ»đđżđŒđč đłđŒđż đ°đčđźđżđ¶đđ
Because healthy teams donât need managing.
They need vision they can run with.
The best leaders arenât fearless.
Theyâre just committed.
To the mission.
To the people.
To doing whatâs rightâđŠđ·đŠđŻ đžđ©đŠđŻ đȘđ”âđŽ đ©đąđłđ„.
Whatâs one decision youâve been avoiding that would bring clarity tomorrow?
Most donor journeys end too early.
Not because the donor lost interest.
But because the organization lost đȘđŻđ”đŠđŻđ”đȘđ°đŻđąđđȘđ”đș.
A first gift is easy.
A second gift is earned.
Hereâs what smart nonprofits do differently:
đ§đ”đČđ đșđźđœ đđ”đČ đłđ¶đżđđ đ”đŹ đ±đźđđ đčđ¶đžđČ đ¶đ đșđźđđđČđżđâđŻđČđ°đźđđđČ đ¶đ đ±đŒđČđ
Welcome series. Personal thank you. A clear next step.
Itâs not automation. Itâs đŠđčđ±đŠđ€đ”đąđ”đȘđ°đŻ-đŽđŠđ”đ”đȘđŻđš.
đ§đ”đČđ đ±đŒđ»âđ đđżđČđźđ đČđđČđżđ đ±đŒđ»đŒđż đđ”đČ đđźđșđČ
Monthly donors get insider updates.
Major donors get personal contact.
Every segment feels seen.
đ§đ”đČđ đ°đŒđșđșđđ»đ¶đ°đźđđČ đđ¶đđ” đżđ”đđđ”đș, đ»đŒđ đżđźđ»đ±đŒđșđ»đČđđ
Donât ghost your donors for six months,
then blitz them at year-end.
đ§đ”đČđ đŻđđ¶đčđ± đđżđđđ đŻđČđłđŒđżđČ đđ”đČđ đźđđž đźđŽđźđ¶đ»
Show impact. Tell stories.
Make them feel like a đ±đąđłđ”đŻđŠđł, not a wallet.
đ§đ”đČđ đ¶đ»đđČđđ đ¶đ» đżđČđčđźđđ¶đŒđ»đđ”đ¶đœđ, đ»đŒđ đ·đđđ đżđČđđČđ»đđČ
Because donors donât give to organizations.
They give to đ±đŠđ°đ±đđŠ they trust.
If you want lifelong donors,
build a journey that feels worth staying on.
What does your donor experience say after the first âthank you?â
Most fundraising messages try to do too much.
Too many stats.
Too many programs.
Too many words.
And in the noise, the donor misses the one thing that matters:
âđȘđ”đźđ đźđżđČ đđŒđ đźđđžđ¶đ»đŽ đșđČ đđŒ đ±đŒâđźđ»đ± đđ”đ đ»đŒđ?â
Hereâs how clear fundraisers cut through:
đ§đ”đČđ đčđČđźđ± đđ¶đđ” đđ”đČ đœđżđŒđŻđčđČđș, đ»đŒđ đđ”đČ đŒđżđŽđźđ»đ¶đđźđđ¶đŒđ»
Donors respond to need, not structure.
đ§đ”đČđ đźđđž đłđŒđż đŒđ»đČ đđ”đ¶đ»đŽ, đ»đŒđ đłđ¶đđČ
Clarity creates confidence.
Confusion creates hesitation.
đ§đ”đČđ đđœđČđźđž đčđ¶đžđČ đ”đđșđźđ»đ, đ»đŒđ đŻđżđŒđ°đ”đđżđČđ
Simple > clever.
Conversational > professional.
đ§đ”đČđ đŻđđ¶đčđ± đđżđŽđČđ»đ°đ đđ¶đđ” đđżđđđ”, đ»đŒđ đ”đđœđČ
Whatâs at stake if the donor doesnât act?
Say thatâhonestly and directly.
đ§đ”đČđ đșđźđžđČ đđ”đČ đ±đŒđ»đŒđż đđ”đČ đ”đČđżđŒ
Not âweâre doing amazing work.â
But âyou can do something amazing right now.â
Every time you write to donors, ask:
đđ°đ¶đđ„ đą 7đ”đ© đšđłđąđ„đŠđł đ”đŠđđ đźđŠ đžđ©đąđ” đ”đ©đȘđŽ đȘđŽ đąđŁđ°đ¶đ”âđąđŻđ„ đžđ©đąđ” đâđź đŽđ¶đ±đ±đ°đŽđŠđ„ đ”đ° đ„đ°?
Because clear always beats clever.
Whatâs one sentence you could cut from your next appeal?
You donât need a better pitch.
You need a better đ§đłđąđźđŠ.
Because how you position the ask
matters more than how you word it.
I call it the đđŒđ»đŒđż đđżđźđșđČ đŠđ”đ¶đłđ.
And once you see it, you canât unsee it.
Most fundraising is framed like this:
âđȘđČ đ”đźđđČ đź đ»đČđČđ±. đȘđ¶đčđč đđŒđ đ”đČđčđœ?â
Thatâs scarcity.
Thatâs pressure.
Thatâs noise.
High-performing campaigns reframe the conversation:
âđ§đ”đČđżđČâđ đșđŒđșđČđ»đđđș đ”đČđżđČ. đđŒ đđŒđ đđźđ»đ đ¶đ»?â
Thatâs invitation.
Thatâs identity.
Thatâs đ±đ¶đđ.
Hereâs what changes when you shift the frame:
â You stop describing your programs
and start painting the future.
â You stop begging for support
and start offering participation.
â You stop spotlighting need
and start showcasing đźđ°đ·đŠđźđŠđŻđ”.
Donors want to belong to something thatâs going somewhere.
Not something thatâs barely holding on.
So next time you write an appeal, ask:
Are you inviting them into a crisis?
Or into a cause?
One creates sympathy.
The other creates đ€đ°đźđźđȘđ”đźđŠđŻđ”.
What frame are your donors looking through right now?
Want better fundraising results?
Bring more đ©đ¶đźđąđŻđȘđ”đș to your marketing.
Most nonprofits focus on building the brand:
Clean design. Recognizable logo. Professional tone.
Thatâs not wrong.
You đŽđ©đ°đ¶đđ„ be trustworthy.
You đŽđ©đ°đ¶đđ„ be respected.
But trust in a brand isnât enough.
đŁđČđŒđœđčđČ đ°đŒđ»đ»đČđ°đ đđŒ đœđČđŒđœđčđČ.
You might call it đ§đ”đČ đđđșđźđ» đđŒđ»đ»đČđ°đđ¶đŒđ» đŁđżđ¶đ»đ°đ¶đœđčđČâ
donors give when they feel emotionally connected
to someone đȘđŻđŽđȘđ„đŠ or đȘđźđ±đąđ€đ”đŠđ„ đŁđș your organization.
Hereâs how to do it:
1. đŁđđ đź đłđźđ°đČ đđŒ đđ”đČ đčđČđźđ±đČđżđđ”đ¶đœ.
Donors want to trust the people behind the mission.
Have your leader show upâon video, in blog posts, in social.
Let supporters hear from đŽđ°đźđŠđ°đŻđŠ, not just đ”đ©đŠ đŁđłđąđŻđ„.
2. đŠđ”đźđżđČ đđđŒđżđ¶đČđ đŒđł đđœđČđ°đ¶đłđ¶đ° đœđČđŒđœđčđČ đŻđČđ¶đ»đŽ đ”đČđčđœđČđ±.
Not âwe helped 3,000 people.â
But âthis is Amina. Hereâs how her life changed.â
When a donor can visualize the person theyâre helping,
they feel ownership. Compassion. Connection.
Thatâs what builds long-term support.
đđđșđźđ» đ°đŒđ»đ»đČđ°đđ¶đŒđ» đ°đżđČđźđđČđ đŒđżđŽđźđ»đ¶đđźđđ¶đŒđ»đźđč đđżđđđ.
Not the other way around.
Who are you helping donors connect to in your next campaign?
Not every donor is a good donor.
There, I said it.
Because if you build your strategy to please everyone,
youâll end up resonating with no one.
The best fundraisers I know are crystal clear on one thing:
đđŒđ»đŒđż đđ¶đ.
Itâs not just about who gives.
Itâs about who đŁđŠđđ°đŻđšđŽ.
I once asked my mentor,
âđđźđđČ đđŒđ đČđđČđż đđŒđčđ± đź đ±đŒđ»đŒđż đđ”đČđ đđ”đŒđđčđ±đ»âđ đŽđ¶đđČ?â
He said yes.
The donor was motivated by đ©đȘđź, not the cause.
So he redirected the donor & the giftâ
to something the donor truly believed in.
âđŹđŒđ đ±đŒđ»âđ đ»đČđČđ± đČđđČđżđ đ±đŒđ»đŒđż,â he told me.
âđđ»đ± đđŒđ đđ”đŒđđčđ±đ»âđ đŻđČ đźđłđżđźđ¶đ± đđŒ đ”đČđčđœ đđ”đČđș đłđ¶đ»đ± đđ”đČ đżđ¶đŽđ”đ đłđ¶đ.â
Hereâs how you know a donor fits:
â They align with your vision, not just your outcomes
â They give with trust, not control
â They stay when urgency fades
â They talk about your đȘđźđ±đąđ€đ”, not your admin costs
Bad donor fit is expensive.
It drains energy.
Dilutes your messaging.
And forces you to design strategies around fear.
Good donor fit builds momentum.
It sharpens your story.
Strengthens your team.
And attracts more of the đłđȘđšđ©đ” đŹđȘđŻđ„ of support.
You donât need every donor.
You need the right onesâdeeply aligned and ready to walk with you.
So before you chase the next gift, ask:
đđżđČ đđČ đŻđđ¶đčđ±đ¶đ»đŽ đź đ°đŒđșđșđđ»đ¶đđ đŒđł đœđźđżđđ»đČđżđâđŒđż đ·đđđ đ°đŒđčđčđČđ°đđ¶đ»đŽ đđżđźđ»đđźđ°đđ¶đŒđ»đ?
If your team canât explain your vision in a sentence,
you donât have a clarity problemâ
you have a đđŠđąđ„đŠđłđŽđ©đȘđ± problem.
Because complexity is never what inspires action.
đđđąđłđȘđ”đș đȘđŽ.
I call it the đ©đ¶đđ¶đŒđ» đđ°đ”đŒ.
Itâs not what you say in the boardroom.
Itâs what your staff repeats in the hallway.
Hereâs how strong leaders create it:
đ§đ”đČđ đ±đ¶đđđ¶đčđč, đ»đŒđ đ±đČđ°đŒđżđźđđČ
If your vision needs a paragraph of explanation,
it wonât survive the chaos of day-to-day work.
đ§đ”đČđ đżđČđœđČđźđ đđ»đđ¶đč đ¶đ đŻđČđ°đŒđșđČđ đ°đđčđđđżđČ
Vision isnât what you announce.
Itâs what your team absorbs through repetition.
đ§đ”đČđ đșđźđžđČ đ¶đ đœđŒđżđđźđŻđčđČ
If your frontline staff canât explain it to a volunteer in 10 seconds,
itâs not ready.
đ§đ”đČđ đźđčđ¶đŽđ» đ±đČđ°đ¶đđ¶đŒđ»đ đđŒ đ¶đâđčđŒđđ±đčđ
Celebrate the yeses that match.
Explain the noâs that donât.
Because when the vision is clear,
the right people lean in.
The wrong distractions fall away.
And momentum starts to compound.
You donât need more words.
You need đ§đŠđžđŠđł đžđ°đłđ„đŽ đ”đ©đąđ” đąđ€đ”đ¶đąđđđș đźđ°đ·đŠ đ±đŠđ°đ±đđŠ.
đđł đ đźđđžđČđ± đđŒđđż đđČđźđș đđ”đźđ đđ”đČ đđ¶đđ¶đŒđ» đ¶đâđđŒđđčđ± đ đ”đČđźđż đđ”đČ đđźđșđČ đźđ»đđđČđż đđđ¶đ°đČ?
Some nonprofits obsess over the wrong numbers.
Open rates. Social likes. Event RSVPs.
And then wonder why đłđŠđ·đŠđŻđ¶đŠ đȘđŽ đ§đđąđ”
and donors are disappearing.
Hereâs the truth:
đĄđŒđ đźđčđč đșđČđđżđ¶đ°đ đźđżđČ đșđŒđșđČđ»đđđș.
I call them đđźđ»đ¶đđ đșđČđđżđ¶đ°đ đ¶đ» đșđ¶đđđ¶đŒđ» đ°đčđŒđđ”đČđ.
They look good in a dashboard.
But they donât move the mission.
Hereâs what high-performing organizations track instead:
đđŒđ»đŒđż đżđČđđČđ»đđ¶đŒđ»
Because keeping a donor is cheaperâand more powerfulâthan chasing a new one.
đŠđČđ°đŒđ»đ± đŽđ¶đłđ đżđźđđČ
Because a second gift turns interest into belief.
đđ¶đłđČđđ¶đșđČ đđźđčđđČ
Because impact multiplies when donors stay, grow, and refer.
đđŒđđ đœđČđż đ±đŒđčđčđźđż đżđźđ¶đđČđ±
Because sustainability matters more than the hype of âbig numbers.â
đđŒđ»đŒđż đČđ»đŽđźđŽđČđșđČđ»đ đ±đČđœđđ”
Not how many saw it.
How many felt it. Shared it. Acted on it.
Data should serve decisions, not just presentations.
The best fundraisers donât just measure whatâs easy.
They measure what đźđąđ”đ”đŠđłđŽ.
đȘđ”đźđ đșđČđđżđ¶đ°đ đ±đŒ đđŒđ đđżđźđ°đž đđ”đźđ đșđŒđđČ đđŒđđż đ»đŒđ»đœđżđŒđłđ¶đ đłđŒđżđđźđżđ±?
Youâve heard it before:
âđ§đ”đČ đ±đŒđ»đŒđż đ¶đ đđ”đČ đ”đČđżđŒ.â
But what does that actually mean for your story?
Itâs not just a nice phrase.
Itâs a framework.
Hereâs how to write your next appeal like your donor is the main character:
đŠđđźđżđ đđ¶đđ” đ”đČđż đŻđźđ°đžđđđŒđżđ.
Where is she coming from? What does she care about?
Speak to her valuesâđŻđ°đ” your orgâs resume.
đđČđłđ¶đ»đČ đ”đČđż đŸđđČđđ.
What change does she want to see in the world?
What injustice is she stepping in to fight?
đđ¶đđČ đ”đČđż đźđ» đźđ»đđźđŽđŒđ»đ¶đđ.
Whatâs standing in the way of that change?
Poverty, violence, hunger, injusticeâname it clearly.
đđźđčđč đ”đČđż đđŒ đźđ°đđ¶đŒđ».
Every hero needs a clear next step.
Tell her exactly what she can do to make a difference.
đŠđ”đŒđ đđ”đźđâđ đźđ đđđźđžđČ.
What happens if she doesnât act?
Let her feel the urgencyânot the guilt.
đŁđźđ¶đ»đ đđ”đČ đœđ¶đ°đđđżđČ đŒđł đđ¶đ°đđŒđżđ.
What does the world look like when she gives?
Describe the impact her gift will make.
Your donor isnât a side character.
Sheâs the one who changes everything.
So write like sheâs the heroâ
because she is.
đȘđ”đźđ đŒđđ”đČđż đČđčđČđșđČđ»đđ đ±đŒ đđŒđ đđđČ đđŒ đđżđ¶đđČ đ±đŒđ»đŒđż-đ°đČđ»đđČđżđČđ± đđđŒđżđ¶đČđ?
You write a great appealâŠ
Itâs donor-centered.
Itâs emotional.
It shows how đŽđ©đŠ is the hero.
Then a donor clicks over to your websiteâ
and suddenly, she disappears.
đȘđ”đźđ đ”đźđœđœđČđ»đČđ±?
You might call it đ§đ”đČ đ đČđđđźđŽđ¶đ»đŽ đ đ¶đđșđźđđ°đ”â
when your appeal speaks to the donorâs heart,
but your website speaks only about đșđ°đ¶.
Hereâs the fix:
đđŒđ»âđ đčđČđ đđŒđđż đłđđ»đ±đżđźđ¶đđ¶đ»đŽ đ°đŒđœđ đźđ»đ± đđČđŻđđ¶đđČ đ°đŒđœđ đčđ¶đđČ đ¶đ» đđđŒ đ±đ¶đłđłđČđżđČđ»đ đđŒđżđčđ±đ.
If your appeal says âYou can change a life,â
your homepage shouldnât say âSince 1984, weâve providedâŠâ
If your email says âYou bring clean water to families,â
your website shouldnât bury the donor under mission statements and program lists.
đđŒđ»đđ¶đđđČđ»đ°đ đŻđđ¶đčđ±đ đđżđđđ.
đđčđźđżđ¶đđ đŻđđ¶đčđ±đ đźđ°đđ¶đŒđ».
Every communicationâespecially your websiteâ
should answer one question:
đȘđ”đźđ đ°đźđ» đ đ±đŒ đ”đČđżđČ?
Treat your website like your best fundraising appeal.
Because itâs not just a brochure.
Itâs where belief becomes action.
If you donât know who youâre talking to, you wonât know what to sayâor how to say it.
Thatâs why the đ§đȘđłđŽđ” đŽđ”đŠđ± in any successful fundraising or marketing campaign isnât writing the appeal or choosing the channel.
Itâs đđ»đ±đČđżđđđźđ»đ±đ¶đ»đŽ đđŒđđż đźđđ±đ¶đČđ»đ°đČ.
But too many nonprofits skip this step.
They jump straight to tactics⊠and wonder why their campaigns fall flat.
đŻ Who are you trying to reach?
đŻ What do they care about?
đŻ Where do they spend time online?
đŻ What are their motivations for giving?
Without clear answers, youâre aiming in the dark.
Hereâs the good news: defining your target audience isnât rocket science.
It just takes intentionality.
Start by:
Reviewing donor data.
Identifying patterns in giving.
Creating personas for different segments.
Interviewing real donors.
Segmenting by behavior, not just demographics.
Testing and refining over time.
Speaking đ„đȘđłđŠđ€đ”đđș to your audienceâs values and desires.
Get this right, and your message will land with power and clarity.
Because when your donor sees herself in your story, sheâs far more likely to give.
Whatâs helped you understand your audience better? Letâs trade notes.
Read more: nonprofitfundraising.com/7-sâŠ
A lot of fundraising advice is about how to raise more money.
And that makes sense.
Revenue is easy to measure.
But hereâs whatâs harder to trackâ
and infinitely more powerful:
đđŒđ đșđđ°đ” đđźđčđđČ đźđżđČ đđŒđ đźđ±đ±đ¶đ»đŽ đđŒ đđŒđđż đ±đŒđ»đŒđżâđ đčđ¶đłđČ?
You might call it đđŒđ»đŒđż-đđ¶đżđđ đđđ»đ±đżđźđ¶đđ¶đ»đŽâ
the kind that doesnât just ask for support,
but offers meaning, purpose, and belonging in return.
When you put the donorâs needs first,
you still raise money.
You just do it in a way that builds đ”đłđ¶đŽđ” instead of pressure.
And winning isnât just hitting your revenue goals.
đđâđ đ”đČđčđœđ¶đ»đŽ đœđČđŒđœđčđČ đłđČđČđč đčđ¶đžđČ đđ”đČđ¶đż đŽđČđ»đČđżđŒđđ¶đđ đșđźđđđČđżđ.
đđâđ đđ”đŒđđ¶đ»đŽ đđœ đđ¶đđ” đŽđżđźđđ¶đđđ±đČ, đ»đŒđ đ·đđđ đŽđŒđźđčđ.
đđâđ đđČđżđđ¶đ»đŽ đŻđŒđđ” đđ”đČ đŽđ¶đđČđż đźđ»đ± đđ”đČ đżđČđ°đČđ¶đđČđż.
Yes, weâre here to fund impact.
But when you focus on the đłđŠđđąđ”đȘđ°đŻđŽđ©đȘđ±,
the results take care of themselves.
Quick:
đȘđ”đźđâđ đŒđ»đČ đœđżđźđ°đđ¶đ°đźđč đđźđ đđŒđ đœđđ đđ”đČ đ±đŒđ»đŒđż đłđ¶đżđđ đ¶đ» đđŒđđż đłđđ»đ±đżđźđ¶đđ¶đ»đŽ?
Too many fundraisers approach donors like theyâre doing us a favor.
âWe donât want to ask too much.â
âShe already gave this year.â
âI donât want to bother him.â
But hereâs the truth:
đđŒđ»đŒđżđ đ±đŒđ»âđ đŽđ¶đđČ đđŒ đŽđČđ đżđ¶đ± đŒđł đđ.
They give because they đ€đąđłđŠ.
You might call it đđ”đČ đŁđŒđđđđżđČ đŁđżđŒđŻđčđČđșâ
when we assume donors want to give đđŠđŽđŽ,
we cut off the chance for them to give đźđ°đłđŠ.
Hereâs what actually inspires generosity:
đđČđčđ¶đČđł đ¶đ» đđ”đČ đșđ¶đđđ¶đŒđ».
đ§đżđđđ đ¶đ» đđ”đČ đ¶đșđœđźđ°đ.
đ đđČđ»đđČ đŒđł đœđđżđœđŒđđČ đđ”đżđŒđđŽđ” đŽđ¶đđ¶đ»đŽ.
You donât have to push.
You have to invite.
When you show up with confidence,
when you report back with results,
when you treat giving as a joyânot a burdenâ
donors respond.
đđŒđ»âđ đźđđđđșđČ đ±đŒđ»đŒđżđ đđźđ»đ đđŒ đđđŒđœ đŽđ¶đđ¶đ»đŽ.
Show them why theyâll đžđąđŻđ” đ”đ° đ€đ°đŻđ”đȘđŻđ¶đŠ.
Whenâs the last time you invited someone to go deeperânot just give again?
Most fundraising appeals donât fail because of what they say.
They fail because of đ©đ°đž they say it.
Too much setup.
Too little urgency.
Too unclear about what the donor can actually do.
Hereâs a simple structure that works:
đŠđđźđżđ đđ¶đđ” đź đđđŒđżđ.
Not a stat. Not a summary.
Drop the reader into a moment that matters.
đĄđźđșđČ đđ”đČ đœđżđŒđŻđčđČđș.
Make it real. Make it immediate.
đŠđ”đŒđ đ”đŒđ đđ”đČ đ±đŒđ»đŒđż đ°đźđ» đ”đČđčđœ.
Not âweâll solve it together.â
But âyou can change this.â
đđ
đœđčđźđ¶đ» đđ”đ đđ”đČ đŽđ¶đłđ đ¶đ đ»đČđČđ±đČđ± đ»đŒđ.
Tie the action to the outcome.
đ đźđžđČ đđ”đČ đźđđž.
Clearly. Boldly. Directly.
đ„đČđ¶đ»đłđŒđżđ°đČ đđ”đČ đ¶đșđœđźđ°đ.
Remind her: this gift đžđȘđđ change something.
đŠđ”đŒđ đđ”đČ đ°đŒđđ đŒđł đ±đŒđ¶đ»đŽ đ»đŒđđ”đ¶đ»đŽ.
What happens if she doesnât act?
đđđž đźđŽđźđ¶đ».
Because clarity beats cleverness.
Itâs not fancy.
Itâs not flowery.
It works.
Whatâs one step in your appeals you tend to skipâor rush?
Want to raise more money?
Write more simply.
Thereâs a concept in psychology called đ°đŒđŽđ»đ¶đđ¶đđČ đłđčđđČđ»đ°đ.
It means people are more likely to believe something
when itâs easy to understand.
You might call it đ§đ”đČ đŠđ¶đșđœđčđ¶đ°đ¶đđ đđłđłđČđ°đâ
the brainâs way of saying:
âđđ§ đ”đ©đȘđŽ đźđąđŹđŠđŽ đŽđŠđŻđŽđŠ, đȘđ” đźđ¶đŽđ” đŁđŠ đ”đłđ¶đŠ.â
Hereâs how it plays out in fundraising:
đŠđ¶đșđœđčđČ đ°đŒđœđ đŻđđ¶đčđ±đ đđżđđđ
The easier your appeal is to understand,
the more believable it becomes.
đđŒđ»đŒđżđ đźđżđČđ»âđ đ°đŒđ»đłđđđČđ±âđđ”đČđâđżđČ đ°đŒđ»đđ¶đ»đ°đČđ±
They see the need, the impact, and the askâclearly.
đđșđŒđđ¶đŒđ»đźđč đ°đčđźđżđ¶đđ đŻđČđźđđ đ°đčđČđđČđż đđŒđżđ±đ đČđđČđżđ đđ¶đșđČ
Youâre not trying to impress donors.
Youâre trying to move them.
đđČđčđ¶đČđł đčđČđźđ±đ đđŒ đźđ°đđ¶đŒđ»
If they trust what youâre saying,
theyâre far more likely to give.
Big words and dense sentences donât make you sound smart.
They make you sound hard to believe.
Write simply.
Be clear.
Raise more money.
đȘđ”đźđâđ đŒđ»đČ đđČđ»đđČđ»đ°đČ đ¶đ» đđŒđđż đ»đČđ
đ đźđœđœđČđźđč đđŒđ đ°đŒđđčđ± đżđČđđżđ¶đđČ đđŒ đŻđČ đđ¶đșđœđčđČđż?