
ALT 1/4 Yunmeng Jiang disciples are arguing. some want to leave, some staying panel 1, 3 disciples facing off 2 disciples, while 1 between them is trying to pacify them disciple 1: What’s so wrong with wanting to leave the sect? This is a dying sect rebuilding with no end in sight! Reputation in the dumps! Empty coffers?! And he’s taking in his nephew!? disciple 2: You’re leaving now?! When he needs us!? disciple 1: We owe no loyalty to him! We were rogue cultivators out for revenge! disciple 2: He gave us a purple! A home! disciple 3: You two please, zongzhu is resting! panel 2, JC steps into frame, only his back is shown. the disciples blush as they turn to look at JC JC: What is all this commotion? disciples, eager: zongzhu! disciple 1: Hmpf. panel 3, shot of the 3 rebellious disciples, two are blushing as they stare at JC disciple 1: Perfect timing, Jiang-Zongzhu! It is with heavy hearts that we must part ways- panel 4, same shot, the last stubborn disciple is blushing too 1: here.

ALT 2/4 Yunmeng Jiang disciples are staring at Jiang Cheng who appears in his inner robes and one outer robe on, hair unbound, looking soft with a sleeping baby Jin Ling in his arms. panel 1, view from behind of Jiang Cheng stepping in front of the crowd of disciples Jiang Cheng: I just put A-Ling to sleep and you choose to bicker like children here? panel 2, Yunmeng Jiang disciples staring and blushing at JC looking very very very casual in his inner robes, hair unbound disciple 2: UGH. disciple 3: Ah, you’ve done it now and woke him up… rest of disciples, staring and blushing: … Jiang Cheng: Yunmeng Jiang has no need for half hearted people. panel 3, Jiang Cheng scowling at them as he holds Jin Ling closer to his chest Jiang Cheng: If they wish so badly to leave, then so be it!

ALT 3/4 What the disciples who want to leave see when they look at this soft Jiang Cheng, dreamy teary eyes and pouty full lips panel 1, Jiang Cheng scowling down at them, eyes tearing up and flushed lips glistening and pouty Jiang Cheng: HMPF! Do as you like. I don’t care! panel 2, the three main disciples who want to leave are flustered and blushing as they continue to stare disciple 1: Huh? Oh, um!

ALT 4/4 panel 1, Jiang Cheng, looking away sadly while patting and squeezing sleeping baby Jin Ling tight to him Jiang Cheng: No one ever stays… Whatever, I’m used to it. panel 2, Jiang Cheng’s words strike the disciples who want to leave RIGHT IN THEIR HEARTS!!!!!!! while the supportive disciples just stare at them in judgement… panel 3, all rebellious disciples kowtow while the supportive disciples watch on in disgust rebellious disciples: JIANG-ZONGZHU, WE PLEDGE OUR LOYALTY TO YOU!!! Jiang Cheng, surprised: HUH!? disciple 3: There, there, zongzhu~ disciple 2: Disgusting.






































